| Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) | |
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:25 am | |
| with zentsu's movements kaito saw his family's death. this was his nightmare. he saw the death of each family member, again and again, one after another. he screamed loudly, holding his head, shaking it feircly. {As sasuke did while watching tsukuyomi} -- he almost cried, but before the tears exited his eyes, he got angry. he looked around, in the darkness, trying ot avoid the illusion of his families deaths. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:29 am | |
| Zentsu moved back quickly The genjutsu faded, grabbing his left eye it was bleeding and had gone blind. "I've...Never..ever met something who can take heavenly fire." Holding his eye closed Zentsu called all his fire back opening his left eye the fire Dissapered inside of it. He was astounded. He held back on his Genjutsu but even what he did had, had anbu Crying for mercy.
(Sorta more like Atamaratsu but i changed it into a genjutsu and added my own twist.)
Last edited by GreedClan on Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:38 am; edited 1 time in total | |
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:34 am | |
| he finally heard zentsu's voice again, and turned in the direction, which sounded the loudest (Because i supose you have your voice echoing everywhere) he looked into the darkness once more, having the illusion of his family's death follow him. "Stop this genjutsu.... so i can kill you... you basterd!!! How dare you show my families deaths!!!!!!!" he yelled out into the darkness. he had finally realised it was a genjutsu, and moved his arms accordingly. he flicked down the ram hand seal, and attempted to release the genjutsu, puffing and panting loudly. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:40 am | |
| (I already released my genjutsu from lack of chakra and blindness xD)
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:43 am | |
| (okk, void my last line! XD) -- kaito stared down at zentsu, panting loudly. "what.... jutsu was that...? How... did you reveal... my families deaths, and then show them to me??" kaito asked, being overwelmed by the jutsu's raw power. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:48 am | |
| Zentsu grinned and took his head band from his neck and tied it over his eye which had stopped bleeding but was still blind for the time being turning Zentsu waved over his shoulder "There are always Shinobi stronger then you, Always" Zentsu started to walk away slowing he was finding it hard to move. He had to get away from people. His demon was going insane, Of course it would after using that Jutsu. and his fire. Zentsu neglected to tell Kaito that he used to only be able to control fire to an extent but after having a demon inside him and making peace with it, His power had tripled if not more. | |
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:50 am | |
| watching zentsu attempt to move away, kaito ran to him, and offered him a shoulder. "You look terrible, come with me, i know a great tea shop we can go to! you can heal up there.." he requested. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:52 am | |
| Zentsu slumped on Kaito honestly not being able to move "No...I'll hurt you" Zentsu passed out he had used way to much chakra Having only been half strength at the beginning of the day He woke up at a shop he could almost move again.
(I forgot to say Zentsu drinks blood because of his demon, Ill have to add that into the story soon he'll need it after the fight xD) | |
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Tue Aug 02, 2011 7:43 pm | |
| kaito looked at zentsu as he woke up. "Hey there... looks like your feeling better.." he said, smiling as he spoke. "i told you this shop is great!" he repeated from earlier. the waiter come to the table and had asked if we wanted a refil, as the 2 had been there for a while, kaito had been drinking soem tea. "yes please, and a cup here for my friend" he asked, still smiling. he took out his wallet and looked into it, seeing just enough money for it. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Wed Aug 03, 2011 4:40 am | |
| zentsu shook his head, he had shown this shinobi, his family dying not but hours earlyer. now they were having tea? "i dont drink tea thanks" zentsu smiled a fake smile an reached in his cloak pullin out a wad of money he tossed it towards kaito and got up still wobbly, he would have to drink soon. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Wed Aug 03, 2011 4:41 am | |
| zentsu shook his head, he had shown this shinobi, his family dying not but hours earlyer. now they were having tea? "i dont drink tea thanks" zentsu smiled a fake smile an reached in his cloak pullin out a wad of money he tossed it towards kaito and got up still wobbly, he would have to drink soon. | |
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:04 am | |
| "oh? alright then, more for me!" he yelled enthusiastically. it was almost as if zentsu was not the boy of whom kaito was just sparring with, but instead he was just a strangeer he found on the streets, of whom kaito could call a friend. he saw zentsu stumble away/ "hmm.. where do you think your going? Your still injured from the fight, i suggest you stay and atleast eat something that you would want to eat. my treat!" he smiled, as he shoved the menu toward zentsu in one hand, in the other he waved zentsu's money around. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Thu Aug 04, 2011 6:05 am | |
| zentsu looked around resting his head on one hand. "ive used to much chakra, and theres only one thing i eat. and i dont think they sell it here" zentsu grinned a evil little smile before his face turned cold again | |
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:50 am | |
| (im not sure where this is going but illbreply soon, like in about 3 hoours, cos my school is having aa fomal, and im getting my nails done....) | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Thu Aug 04, 2011 5:12 pm | |
| (idk where its going, i was kinda going for a show and tell of each others history. then maybe travling together idk honestly. my creativitys blocked cause im so stressed ans im doing all my posting off my phone. and alright have fun) | |
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Fri Aug 05, 2011 3:07 am | |
| kaito looked at him confused by his face. almost out of chakra, and showing an evil grin like that? its almost like he is the type who steales chakra. hmm, but if i could befriend him maybe he wouldnt think of using my chakra. "hmm.. well why dont you just sit, and talk? Maybe.... history? if you tell me yours, ill tell you mine" he said with a grin, as he took another sip from his tea, which was getting dangerously low. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Fri Aug 05, 2011 3:37 am | |
| zentsu leaned back. he didnt know why he wanted to tell this boy his history but he did leaning back he began his story "i was a prodejy from the mist my nickname was the fire hidden in the mist. while on a mission my clan was wiped out only my mom and i was left. when she died i defelcted from the mist. i tried a... ritual to see my moms ghost. when i did that a demon from hell was cast in me. now i need blood to survive. using my fire and chakra make it, to where i need blood sooner." zentsu closed his eyes listening for kaito's reaction | |
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Fri Aug 05, 2011 8:57 pm | |
| kaito would have normally laughed, thinking it was a joke, hoping for the other person to laugh with him, but with this boy, kaito held his breath. he looked down, and thought of what to say. "Thats.. terrible... we should probably get you some blood then... where should we go?" kait owas being strangley addictable to this boy. he wanted to help him, so he asked this questions, moving from his seat as he did, now standing up. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:38 am | |
| zentsu was shocked and silent. he had expected kaito to laugh, or run or even scream, anything but offer to help. shaking his head zentsu stood infront of kaito. "i cant jus pick any one... well okay i can. but i need a place like an alley way. and when i drink i release seratonin into my victim so its... erotic for them." zentsu was looking for a target in the shop and relized there wasnt any. looking back at kaito he grinned | |
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:09 pm | |
| kaito had a shiver sent down his back. "Uhh.. not.. not me?" he said with a low voice. kaito got up, and started to walk outside. he looked both sides, then saw the sparring area nearby. he could hear some jutsu names being yelled out and could even hear some grunts as the people were being hit. "Why dont we wait for a deadly sparring mstch to begin, and steal the knocked out, or even dead body?" kaito wondered as he turned back to zentsu. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:18 pm | |
| zentsu looked thought full. "i take the risk of someone doing a jutsu that could effect the blood stream" zentsu made a face last time he drank tainted blood he puked for a week. he put his hand on kaito's shoulder "it wont hurt, i promise. itll feel nice" zentsu smiled like he had planned many times, he would release extra seretonin this time. | |
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:28 pm | |
| kaito was feeling a strong urge to run. but he sparred with this boy, and he knew his story. so now kaito was willing to help him. "Well... if nothing else will work... then fine... we'll go.. over there." kaito said, pointing toward an alley next to the tea shop. he started walking in that direction. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:34 pm | |
| zentsu grinned he was bemused. he walked behind kaito casting a sealing jutsu over the entrance of the alley. his eyes grew dark red "slow or fast?" zentsu stepped closer looking for the vein in kaito's neck | |
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Kkristen2000 Genin
Number of posts : 242 Age : 29 Location : Australia... Registration date : 2011-07-08
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:37 pm | |
| kaito grew tense, the closer to the bite the more tense he became. this in a way helped zentsu for one of his veins moved out of place. "fast.. please.. i want it over and-done with..." he answered. he moved hid red hair to the back of his neck, allowing more veins to be seen, giving zentsu a selection. | |
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GreedClan Genin
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 29 Location : In your face~ Also in Indiana under a tree Registration date : 2011-07-20
| Subject: Re: Walking on clouds. (Kkristen2000, Greed) (Semi-Private) Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:56 pm | |
| zentsu nodded an tripped kaito and was ontop of him before he hit the ground zentsu bit into kaitos neck sucking the blood from it pumping sereatonin in through his teeth. he knew kaito wasnt feeling pain. but everyone expirenced it diffrently, some was erotic other was a high of sorta. | |
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